Thursday, November 11, 2010

नज़्म

के कहीं खो ना जाये राहगीर कोई,
फिर उन्ही राहों पर चलते चलते , 
जिनमे हम भटकते रहे उम्र भर
के मिल जाये किसी थके भटके राही को,
इनकी छाव में चंद लम्हों का सुकून 
इसलिए इन "नज्मों" में हमने अपने क़दमों के निशान छोडें हैं|

14 comments:

*KHUSHI* said...

" इसलिए इन "नज्मों" में हमने क़दमों के निशान छोडें हैं "

wah... meeta..

meeta said...

@khushiji thanku for going through it..glad u liked it :)

ani_aset said...

kya baat hai yaara lovely :) i like people writing in hindi :)

Surubhi said...

really nice meeta :)

meeta said...

@ani thanku...hindi really is not my cup of tea..but at times i just manage to dole out a few torn lines :)

meeta said...

@surubhi thanku :)

Sudhanshu Ojha said...

very b'ful

Elena said...

Ok Meeta I'll sound like an idiot but since I don't read hindi I could only appreciate it for its aesthetic beauty. What a 'beautiful' artistic looking language. Elena of My Quest

meeta said...

@Sudhanshu thanku :)

meeta said...

Elna i'm sorry I din't translate it..I can understand what u said...hat matters is the idea beneath a writing..it's that which is the beauty of a writing..language is a mere tool :)

This is an attempt to try & explain my urge to write these poems..i write 'em to leave behind a relic of my presence..for people who decide to walk the same road that I have choosen & when they go through the hard times that I went through they can read these poems, and find a bit of peace knowing that they are not alone..that there were others who experienced what they going through now & there will be others too.

Adee said...

this is incredible meeta!
and now u know why i hate calling u baby kyra!
special *hugs* for this n this verse only :)

paras said...

nice one doc..
ke gar hum bhatke to kya hua
kisi bhate hua to sahara to diya
jisi duniya ki bheed ni thukraya
usse hamare lafzon ne aashiyana to diya

meeta said...

@Adee thanku HD :)

meeta said...

@paras that was a beautiful comment u wrote...thanku :)